Question

【题目】书面表达（共1小题，满分20分）

你班新转入一位来自澳大利亚的同学，名叫Sophia。请根据表格提供的信息，写一篇短文，介绍Sophia及班级的情况，并对Sophia的到来表示欢迎。

About Sophia	About the class
from Sydney, 15 years old	hard－working
outgoing, happy	helpful, get along well
good at swimming	groupwork
…	…

注意：（1）短文内容可适当增加；

（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；

（3）词数：80－100；

（4）短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。

短文首句：Hello, class, May I have your attention, please?

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Answer 1

【答案】

Hello, class. May I have your attention, please?

Today, we have a new classmate. Her name is Sophia. She is from Sydney, Australia , and she is 15 years old. She is an out-going girl with big eyes and she would like to make others happy. She is good at swimming. All the classmates in our class are hard-working and helpful. So I think we can get on well with Sophia. I hope we can do a lot of group work and make a rapid progress together in the future.

That’s all, thank you.

【解析】

试题分析：本文要求根据提纲提示，介绍新同学Sophia及班级的情况。要包含所提示的信息，并可适当增加。短文用一般现在时态，用第三人称形式，要注意主语三人称单数时谓语动词要像名词变复数那样加s或es.

写作亮点：本范文按照题目要求和提纲提示进行写作，包含了所提示的所有信息，层次清楚，叙述完整，重点突出。文中介绍人物时的with短语，be good at，get on well with等等结构用得很好。作为一篇发言稿，语言简捷、精炼，是它的另一大特点。