Question

 在你的记忆里，儿时的家乡是否还是现在的样子呢？是不是在悄然间，你的家乡已发生了变化？请用五句话描述家乡十年来的变化，注意使用现在完成时。

分析：本次写作是使用五个独立的句子，用现在完成时来描述家乡的变化。

行文思路：由题目中要求可知，本次写作可以从五个方面的变化来入手，如衣、食、住、行等。髙分点拢：正确使用现在完成时，注意动词过去分词的变化。

佳作展示：

1. __________________________ 

2. _________________________  

3.  _________________________ 

4.  _________________________ 

5. _________________________  

Answer 1

1. We have lived in taller and brighter buildings.

2. We have built more wide roads.

3. Many families have had their own cars.

4. People have had more and healthier food to eat.

5. People have had different kinds of clothes to satisfy their needs.