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【题目】书面表达（15分）

请根据以下提示介绍你所喜爱的篮球明星林书豪（Jeremy Shu-How Lin）。

1. 林书豪，男，24岁，身高191厘米，看起来很强壮。他来自美国。

2. 在业余时间，他喜欢听音乐和看书。他认为看书很有趣。

3. 他篮球打得很好。他的梦想是在下届奥运会（next Olympic Games）上打球。

My Favorite Basketball Player

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

My Favorite Basketball Player

Jeremy Shu-How Lin is my favorite basketball player. He is 24 years old. He comes from America. He is 191cm tall. He looks strong and plays basketball very well.

Jeremy Shu-How Lin plays basketball every day. In his free time, he likes reading and listening to music. He thinks reading is fun.

Jeremy Shu-How Lin has a dream. He wants to play in the next Olympic games . I hope his dream can come true.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍介绍你所喜爱的篮球明星林书豪。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Jeremy Shu-How Lin is...，He is ...，he likes...，He wants...，I hope...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后祝愿林书豪梦想成真。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了林书豪是我最喜爱的篮球明星，接下来介绍林书豪的年龄、国籍、长相和爱好，最后介绍林书豪的梦想，并祝愿他梦想成真。此处come from, play basketball, like doing sth, want to do sth, come true等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。