Question

【题目】写作

寒假过后，你准备参加学校“英语角”开展的“用英语讲故事”活动，你选取了“记一次旅行话题”话题。请你根据下表所提示的要点，以A trip to Beijing为题，简述你的北京之旅，并谈谈感受。

时间	2月10日一早出发去机场，一个半小时后到达
景点	长城、天安门、故宫、王府井等
活动	拍照、观看升国旗、购物……
食物	北京烤鸭……
感受	……

注意：

1、表达中必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2、词数不少于80。开头已写好，不计入总词数。

提示词：升国旗：the raising of the national flag

I went to Beijing with my parents this winter holiday.________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】

I went to Beijing with my parents this summer holiday. We left for the airport early in the morning on 10th February. It took us about one and a half hours to fly to Beijing.

There are many places of interest in Beijing. On the first day, we climbed the Great Wall and enjoyed beautiful views there. On the second day, we went to Tian’anmen Square to watch the raising of the national flag. Then we visited the Palace Museum. We took a lot of photos.

On the third day, we went shopping in Wangfujing Street. I bought some nice things for my friends. During our stay in Beijing, we also tasted Beijing Duck and some other local food. They were delicious.

I enjoyed my trip to Beijing very much. I hope to visit Beijing again some day.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文给出了写作的提纲，在写作时要构思好文章的结构，注意要点一定齐全。句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致。文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。

写作亮点：这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全。文中有一些好的表达方式如We left for the airport early in the morning on 10th February. It took us about one and a half hours to fly to Beijing.等等。