Question

假如你是李强，你的美国笔友Shirley正在学习汉语。她在给你的来信中介绍了她的汉语老师的情况。请根据以下信息用英语写一封回信，向她介绍你的英语老师Miss Li。

Appearance	Tall slim smart
Favourite colour	Blue
Hobbies	Reading traveling
Personalities	Helpful patient
Achievements	First prize in the teaching competition…

要求：

1.词数80左右。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。

3.根据所给信息作适当发挥，要求条理清楚，语意连贯，字迹工整。

Dear Shirley.

Thank you for telling me about your Chinese teacher. I think he has a good sense of humour. Now let me tell you something about my English teacher, Miss Li.

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Best wishes,

Yours sincerely

Li Qiang

 

Answer 1

Dear Shirley.

Thank you for telling me about your Chinese teacher. I think he has a good sense of humour. Now let me tell you something about my English teacher, Miss Li.

She is not only tall and slim but also smart.Whatever they are light blue or dark blue, She is interested in all kinds of things which are blue. She likes reading and travelling. So she often goes to the library after class on weekdays and pays for a visit the place of interests on weekends. She is such an excellent teacher that she wins the first prize in the teaching competition in our city.

Best wishes,

Yours sincerely

Li Qiang

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文作者写英语老师的个人情况，包括外表、性格、爱好及成就等，主要用一般现在时态。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如be interested in,not only... but also,all kinds of ,likes doing,after class,on weekdays,pays for a visit,on weekends.等语，文中还用到了定语从句 which are blue，条件状语从句Whatever they are light blue or dark blue,结果状语从句She is such an excellent teacher that she wins the first prize in the teaching competition in our city.文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

考点：提纲作文