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根据提示写一篇日记，记录十月一日（星期一）。你和你的朋友曹刚一起去参观上海博物馆的事。词数：70左右。

1. 距离：博物馆离家约两公里；

2. 交通工具：决定骑自行车去；

3. 时间：八点出发，十点回家；

4. 内容：见到了许多照片、实物等，学到了很多内容。还看见了许多游人。

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Answer 1

【答案】

Monday, Oct. 1                                     Fine

Today is the first day of the National Day. My friend Cao Gang and I went to visit Shanghai Museum. It is about 2 kilometres away from my home. So we decided to go there by bike. We set off at 8 o’clock. At the museum we saw many photos and other things. We learned a lot. There we saw a lot of children with their parents. At ten we left the museum for home. We had a wonderful time today.

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，根据所给提示根据提示写一篇日记，记录十月一日（星期一）。你和你的朋友曹刚一起去参观上海博物馆的事，写作中能正确运用时态，注意了应用文体日记的书写格式，语句通顺，符合逻辑。