Question

A Good Friend In My Mind

英国有句谚语：结识新朋友，不忘老朋友，老朋友是金，新朋友是银(Make new friends, but keep the old; Those are silver, these are gold. )。中国自古亦有“有朋自远方来，不亦乐乎？”等描绘朋友之间友情的名句。初中的学习生活即将结束了，在这段时间里你一定结识了许多朋友，并产生了深厚的友谊。请你写一篇文章介绍一位你心目中的好朋友。文章必须包含以下内容：1. 人物简介；2. 给你的帮助；3. 你的感受。

要求： 1）条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确、逻辑清晰；

2）文中不能出现真实的姓名和校名；

3）80词左右。（开头已给出，不计入总次数。）

Answer 1

A life without friends is like a life without the sun. Nobody can live alone in the world I have many friends. Among them Ann is my best friend.

Ann is kind and honest. We play and study together every day. When I am in trouble, she gives me a hand; when I am upset, she gives me comfort and encouragement. She shares not only happiness but also sadness with me. With her help, I am able to grow healthily. Thanks to her, I have made great progress in many ways. However, our school life is over soon. I will miss her.

As the saying goes, “Make new friends，but keep the old ones.” I think a true friend plays an important role in our life.

【解析】

试题分析：

这篇短文要求我们用英文介绍一位心目中的好朋友，并用上所给的信息。学生在写的过程中可能会有不会拼写的单词或句意表达不畅。

【亮点说明】1. 本文紧扣要求对自己心目中的好朋友Ann做了简单介绍，，用了所给的信息。2. 内容完整。包括Ann所给与给的帮助和自己的感受。