Question

【题目】文段表达（10分）

根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的短文。所给的英文提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

生活中总会发生一些给人印象深刻的事情，有时令人捧腹大笑，有时让人热泪盈眶，有时又让人后悔不已……。假如你是李明，你的英国笔友Mike想和你分享这种经历，请你给Mike回一封邮件，向他描述一件你经历过的事件，包含以下内容：

1) When and where did it happen?

2) What was it?

3) How did you feel about it?

提示词语：on one’s way to school，fall down，hurt，help，feel moved.

Dear Mike,

Glad to hear from you again! _______________________________________________

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Yours,

Li Ming

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mike,

Glad to hea from you again! Just as you have said, we experience different things every day. Now, I’d like to share one of them with you.

It happened on my way to school. One moming I was riding my bike very quickly because I was afraid of being late for school. Suddenly a dog appeared and it nearly ran into my bike. I felt very nervous and fell down from the bike. I hurt my arms and my knees so badly that I couldn’t stand up, nor could I go on riding my bike to school. At that time,a cleaner came up to me and asked me if I needed any help. I told him what had happened. He helped me to stand up and walked to my school with me sitting on the back seat of the bike. In the end,I got to school on time. While I was saying thanks to him,I saw sweat running down his face,I felt very moved.

This is one thing that moved me deeply. Have you ever met this kind of thing? I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。要求介绍过去发生的一件事情。主要介绍三个方面：发生的时间和地点，时间的内容，自己对这件事情的感受。主要用过去时态。注意提示词上学的路上，摔跤，受伤。这就已经把发生的事限定在一定范围中。

【亮点说明】完全符合题目要求，观点正确，要点齐全。句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性。