Question

20．书面表达．请你以MyHobbies为题，写篇英语短文．
要求：
1．在My后面加上适当的词补全标题．
2.80个词左右．
3．字迹工整，语言规范．
4．鼓励写出真情实感．
5．中文不能出现考生的真实姓名、地址、学校等相关信息．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
I used to ride a bike and read story books我过去经常骑自行车和读故事书．used to do sth．固定句型，过去经常做某事．
高分句型二
 I thought pets were very friendly and lovely我认为宠物非常友好和可爱．
这是一个宾语从句，I thought是主句，后面的是宾语从句，注意时态应该用一般过去时．

解答 My Hobbies
     Different people have different hobbies．I have some hobbies，too．【开篇点明主题】I used to ride a bike and read story books【高分句型一，注意固定句型的使用】．They could give us lots of knowledge．I keep cats and dogs．I thought pets were very friendly and lovely【高分句型二，注意宾语从句的使用】，but now I like listening to music and chatting on the Internet，because music can relax me after the daily work and chatting can bring me happiness and friendship．
     I have different hobbies in different seasons．In spring I like flying kites．In summer I go swimming．I often climb hills in the fall．I like making snowmen best in winter．【正文部分详细介绍爱好】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，多阅读此类题材，将词汇归类整理；动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词．写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．