Question

假如你是李华，即将初中毕业。请根据下面表格中的提示内容，给在读的学弟学妹们写一封信，讲述你对自己满意和不满意的方面，并希望他们在学校度过一段美好的时光。

满意的方面	学习努力，养成了良好的学习习惯
乐于助人，尤其是帮助那些在功课方面有困难的同学
不满意的方面	很少锻炼身体
不常参加社会活动

要求：

1. 语言流畅，行文连贯；

2. 80词左右。 （开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）

Dear friends,

How time flies and I’ll

 

 

 

Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

Dear friends,

How time flies and I’ll graduate from the junior school soon.

Since I entered this school, I have been studying hard and have developed some good study habits. As a result, I have been doing well in my subjects. And I have always been ready to help others, especially those classmates who have had difficulty in their lessons during the past three years.

However, I didn’t take much exercise. I didn’t often take part in social activities, either.

Now I hope you’re having a great time at school.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。运用适当的短语表达中心思想，增加作文的可读性。完成提示词时也要符合事实。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点：提纲作文。