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5．假定你是苏华，你最近认识的英国笔友David给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解你初中三年来在学习和生活方而的一些收获、困惑和感受．请认真阅读下而的邮件，根据信中的内容及你的实际用英语回复．

To：suhua@china．com

From：davidsmith@britain．com

Subject：School life

Dear Su Hua， Glad to hear you're graduating from junior high．I'm interested in how you feel about those three years of school life．Would you please tell me the following things？ ●What do you like best about your school life？ ●What's the biggest problem as a junior student？ ●Who has helped you most？And why？ ●Do you enjoy your school life？Why or why not？ I look forward to hcaring from you soon． All the best， David

洼意：1．词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；
2．回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺；
3．文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息．
Dear David，
Thank you so much for your email．I'm very happy to tell you about my school life．

How about your school life？Write to me soon．
Best wishes，
Su Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Whenever I am in great need，my English teacher always comes to help me．
句中"Whenever I am in great need"为时间状语从句，句中短语有"be in great need 最需要"．这句话意为：无论任何我需要的时候，我的英语老师总会来帮助我．
高分句型二：
She is the person who has helped me most in the junior high school．
句中"who has helped me most"为定语从句，修饰"the person"．这句话意为：她是初中里帮助我最多的人．

解答 Dear David，
      Thank you so much for your email．I'm very happy to tell you about my school life．（开篇点题）
      I like the Football Club best because I've made quite a few friends by joining the club．Moreover，it's an excellent chance to learn team spirit．
     However，I've also met some problems over the three years．The biggest one is how to achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobbies．Whenever I am in great need，my English teacher always comes to help me．【高分句型一】She is the person who has helped me most in the junior high school．【高分句型二】（介绍我的学校生活）
     In short，I enjoy my school life because it's colourful and meaningful．（总结全文）
      How about your school life？Write to me soon．
                                                                                                                     Best wishes，
                                                                                                                       Su Hua

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