Question

本单元主要讲述学生在学业、交际时的担忧和烦恼以及生活中的一些问题。针对这类问题，常常会设置征求建议或提建议类的书信题。写此类文章时要注意以下几点：

1.   征求建议和提建议都常用书信体，要注意书信的正确格式。

2.   征求建议时要清楚地阐明自己面临的问题及自己的困惑。

3.   建议信要给人真诚、亲切的感觉，建议要中肯，要有针对性。

...典型例题

下面是大明写给他的朋友Tom的一封信，信中讲述了他的烦恼。请你以Tom的身份，给他写一封80词左右的回信，在信中指出他的问题并给他提出建议。信的开头已给出，不计人总词数。Dear Tom,

My classmate, Lucy, bought a new pen. I liked it very much, so I used it without her permission. Unluckily, I broke it. Then I put it back secretly. Now she finds out the truth and is very angry with me. I don't know what to do. Can you help me?

Yours, Darning

Dear Darning,

Now I know your problem.

 

 

                                 Yours, Tom

思路点拨

1.    明确要求：give some advice

2.    指出问题：used it without her permission;put it back secretly

3.    提出建议：say sorry to her as soon as you can; buy a new pen for her

4.   表达祝愿：I hope that —
小试身手

Dear Darning,

Now I know your problem.

 

 

 

 

                                    Yours, Tom

Answer 1

Dear Darning,

Now I know your problem.  You've made two mistakes.

First, you used your classmate's pen without her permission. Second, when you broke the pen, you didn't tell her the truth. Yes, you must tell her as soon as you can. If you tell her the truth, perhaps she'll be angry with you, but at least you'll prove you are honest.

Then I think you should offer to pay. If you buy a new pen for her, she will realize that you're truly sorry.

I hope the advice can help you. I'm sure you will make up with her soon.

Yours, Tom