Question

3月29日是校园安全教育日，请你以“创建平安校园”为主题，根据以下三个方面的提示写一篇英语演讲稿。

How to keep safe in school
In P.E. classes	In the dining hall	In the science lab
wear sports shoes do warming up exercises …	don’t run wait in line …	keep your hands away from don’t work alone …

注意：文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校名；80-100词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! It’s very important for us to keep safe in school.                               
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                            

Answer 1

Hello, everyone! It’s very important for us to keep safe in school. We should always keep our safety issue in mind. In order to do that, we should remember the following three tips.
First, we must wear sports shoes to protect ourselves in P.E. classes. Before taking sports, it’s very necessary to do warming up exercises. And never play too much.
Second, don’t run in the dining hall， for the floor may be slippery. We should avoid bumping into people. And we should also develop a good habit of waiting in line.
Third, when you are in the science lab, make sure to keep your hands away from the chemical materials. And don’t work alone, just do as the teacher asks you.
In all, the most important thing is your own awareness. We are precious. We need safety.

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。以表格的形式给出了作文的主要内容，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点。根据材料内容确定主要句子的时态，及句式等重要内容。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。
点评：做英语书面表达时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误.