Question

【题目】根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

假如你是李华，在你的生活中一定有人给予你无私的爱和帮助。某英文网站正在开展题为 "The person I want to thank" 征文比赛。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：谁是你想要感谢的人？为什么你要感谢他（她）？你从他/身上学到了什么？

提示词语: mother, busy, take care of, cook, encourage, help, love, hard

提示问题:Who do you want to thank?

Why do you want to thank him/her?

What do you learn from him/her?

The person I want to thank

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Answer 1

【答案】The person who I want to thank most is my mother. When I was ill she looked after me carefully. If I felt upset, she would talk to me and encourage me. She is not only my mother but also my best friend. I real want to say thanks to my mother. I also want to tell her I will love her forever.

【解析】这是一篇话题作文。要求以"The person I want to thank"为题写一篇短文，内容包括：谁是你想要感谢的人？为什么你要感谢他（她）？你从他/身上学到了什么？根据所给出的材料内容可知本文时态用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称主要用第一人称和第三人称。在写作的时候，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，注意不要出现语法错误。另外，可以用上一些句型、短语，较高级的语言，这样会使文章更出色。最后必须认真检查是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。