Question

今年东台正在申报全国文明城市，你们学校的English Club正在举办以“创建文明城市，争做文明市民”为主题的征文活动，请你根据以下的内容提示及要求写一篇应征稿。
内容提示： ◆ 尊敬师长，明礼诚信    ◆友善待人，乐于助人
◆ 遵守交规，不闯红灯    ◆保护环境
◆ 你的观点
写作要求：
1. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3. 词数：90词左右（开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：respect (vt.尊敬), obey traffic rules遵守交规
Help to Make Dongtai a Civilized City
We all know that Dongtai is applying for the national civilized city. As students, what should we do ? _____________________________________________________________
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Dongtai is our hometown. Let's try our best to make it a civilized city.

Answer 1

Help to Make Dongtai a Civilized City
We all know that Dongtai is applying for the national civilized city. As students, what should we do ? We must respect our teachers, parents and the old. We should also be polite and honest. Besides, we should help those who are in need and be friendly to the people around us. It is important for us obey traffic rules, too.When crossing the streets, we should walk on the zebra crossing. We mustn’t go across the street when the traffic lights are red.What’s more, we should protect the environment. For example，we mustn't step on the grass or pick flowers. We mustn’t drop litter carelessly.
Dongtai is our hometown.Let's try our best to make it a civilized city.

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如:that引导的宾语从句We all know that……；强调句式It is adj for sb to do sth，做某事对某人来说怎么样等。副词Besides，及短语What’s more, 更重要的是；For example例如；try one’s best 等的使用是本文看起来更加条理清楚，符合逻辑关系。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。