Question

【题目】文中有五处错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除，或修改。

How do different things affect us ?We did a survey last week .Here are part of the results .Different people have different feelings about the same thing .The loud music makes Jack exciting .And he ofen listens to it in his spare time .And it makes Marc nervous .He dislikes it..When Annie hears loud music ,she wants to leave for as fast as she can.What about waiting people ?Helen is not patient ,and it drives her mad.

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【答案】How do different things affect us ?We did a survey last week .Here are part of the results .Different people have different feelings about the same thing .The loud music makes Jack exciting .And he ofen listens to it in his spare time .And it makes Marc nervous .He dislikes it..When Annie hears loud music ,she wants to leave for as fast as she can.What about waiting people ?Helen is not patient ,and it drives her mad.

1.are 改为 is 2.exciting 改为 excited 3.And改为 But 4.leave for去掉for 5.waiting后加for

【解析】短文大意：不同的人对同一件事会产生不同的感受。大声的音乐会使Jack兴奋，但是会使Marc紧张不安，当Annie听到响亮的音乐时，她想尽可能快地离开。在等人方面，Helen没有耐心，这会使她发疯。

1. Here are part of the results. 这是调查结果的一部分。这是一个Here be句型，be动词的使用，要根据后面的主语而定，本句的中心单词在part上，因为part用的是单数形式，故are 改为is。

2. The loud music makes Jack exciting. 大声的音乐使杰克很兴奋。exciting常用来修饰物，excited常用来修饰人，本句用excited修饰Jack，故exciting 改为excited。

3. And it makes Marc nervous. 这使Marc紧张不安。通过上下句可知，Jack喜欢听大声的音乐而Marc不喜欢听这种音乐，前后句表示转折关系，故And改为But。

4. When Annie hears loud music, she wants to leave for as fast as she can. 当安妮听到响亮的音乐时，她想尽可能快地离开。leave for+目的地，本句中leave后面没有表示地点的名词，因此要去掉for。

5. What about waiting people? 等人呢？wait for sb.等待某人，故waiting后加for。