Question

【题目】书面表达。

最近，你们学校开展了以“中国梦，我的梦”为主题的活动，作为一名中学生应该有自己的梦想，你的梦想是什么呢？请根据所给是题目用英语写一篇短文，表达自己的梦想以及如何实现这个梦想。

要求：1.语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；

2. 文中不得使用真实姓名。

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Answer 1

【答案】

My dream

Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a doctor. When I was in Grade Seven. I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctors were very friendly to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I’m very healthy. Since then I have hoped to become a doctor. In order to achieve my dream, I will study hard. I’ll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger.

To be a doctor is really great. I think my dream will come true one day.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍自己的梦想以及如何实现它。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时，人称为单数第一、第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：My dream is...；When I was...； Now I’m ...；In order to ....； I’ll give my love to......等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要表达自己梦想会实现的愿望。

亮点说明：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了自己的愿望，接下来介绍产生这个愿望的原因，最后指出如何实现自己的愿望。此处用了were very friendly to，cheered me up， hoped to，achieve my dream， as much as possible，out of danger 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。