Question

1．校团委正举行"畅想未来"的征文活动，请根据提示，以"My ideal school life"为题，写一篇100词左右的短文

现在	未来
至少写两点现在的情况	1．多彩的校园生活（课外活动…）
	2．多样的学习方式（网上学习…）
	3．和谐的人际交往（交友互助…）
	4．丰富的校外活动（做志愿者…）

要求：
1．所写内容必须包括表格格中所有的馆息，并作进为的发挥；
2．开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3．不得出現真实的人们、校名、地名等相关信息．
My ideal school life
I am a student in Grade 9．___________________________________________________________
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I hope ___________________________________________________________________________
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This is my ideal school life．I hope my dream will come true some day．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I think my ideal school life is meaningful and colorful我认为我的理想中的学校生活是有意义的多彩的．
think后是省略that的宾语从句．

【高分句型二】
I would like to join in the organizations which I am interested in．我想要加入我感兴趣的组织．
which作为关系词的定语从句，修饰organizations．

解答 My ideal school life
I am a student in Grade 9．I have too much homework every day and I don't have time for after-school activities．I think my school life is terrible．（现在）
Everyone has their own ideal school．I think my ideal school life is meaningful and colorful【高分句型一】．I'm very happy to study in the school．
We have five classes every day．I like all the lessons，because the lessons are very interesting．And we can choose our favorite lessons to learn．At noon，we have an hour's rest time．During the rest time，we can chat with classmates．
I hope our after-school activities are rich and colorful．We can play many ball games after school every day．There are many organizations and clubs in our school．I would like to join in the organizations which I am interested in．【高分句型二】I would like to join many clubs，too．Of course，if you want to live in the school，you can do it．Most of the students like staying in school，because the school is very comfortable．
    Doing homework is part of the school life，but the work is not much，and very easy．We often use emails to send our homework to the teacher．Our teachers and classmates are very helpful and kind．If you have a problem，you can ask the teacher and classmates，they will help you．During my holidays，I want to be volunteer to help others in need．（未来）
This is my ideal school life．I hope my dream will come true some day．

点评 这是一篇给材料作文．本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来．动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥．根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题．写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．