Question

寒假即将来临，为了能过一个丰富有意义的假期，Simon想要制定一个寒假计划，请你根据以下表格中的提示，帮助Simon用英语写一份寒假计划吧。

 

活动方面	每天运动	增强体质
外出旅游	放松心情
家务方面	下厨做饭	帮助父母
打扫房间	保持整洁
学习方面	阅读书籍	增长知识
……（自拟）	……（自拟）

 

注意：1．词数90左右；

2．短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；

3．短文须包括表中全部内容，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺；

4．短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

The winter holiday is coming. How Can we make good use of it and make it Interesting and colourful? Here is my Plan for my winter holiday.

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This is my winter holiday plan. Hope it is of some value to you.

 

Answer 1

The winter holiday is coming. How Can we make good use of it and make it Interesting and colourful? Here is my Plan for my winter holiday.

I will exercise for about an hour every day so that I can keep heaithy. I will go on a trip with my family to nrelax myself. What’s more. I want tocook meals in order to help my parents reduce their stresws. And I’ll clean the rooms to keep them clean and tidy.

As a student, I will have to finish my homework. So I plan to spend one or two hours doing my homework every day. I’ll also read books as many as possible to learn more knowledge.

This is my winter holiday plan. Hope it is of some value to you.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般将来时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: What’s more更重要的是；So I plan to spend one or two hours doing my homework every day. I’ll also read books as many as possible to learn more knowledge. 所以我打算每天花一两个小时做我的家庭作业。我也会尽可能读更多的书学习更多的知识。等,学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

考点：提纲作文