Question

书面表达（满分10分）
前一段时间，歌舞《江南style》风靡全球，而韩国歌手朴载相更是凭借此歌红遍全世界。请根据下表所提供的信息写一篇英语短文介绍一下PSY（鸟叔）:

要求：1. 词数: 80个左右（开头和结尾已给出的内容不记入总词数）；
2. 内容必须包括上表中的要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐字翻译；
3. 条理清楚、语句连贯；
Have you heard of Gangnam Style? What do you know about the singer who sings this song?
PSY comes from                                                                                     
                                                                                                 
Let’s sing and dance to the song Gangnam Style together now!

Answer 1

Have you heard of Gangnam Style? What do you know about the singer who sings this song?
PSY comes from Korea. His nickname is Uncle Bird. He was born in December 11, 197
7.He is fat and has small eyes. He always wears a pair of sunglasses and this makes him very cool. He speaks both Korean and English. He has a sister and he lives with his father. He got married in 2006 and has twin daughters. He is an experienced singer and he is good at Hip-Hop and Rap Music. His main songs are Birds, Gangnam Styles and so on. Gangnam Style is one of his most popular songs. It made him famous immediately throughout the world, This song is liked by people of all ages. And it has turned into many other kinds of “styles”
Let’s sing and dance to the song Gangnam Style together now!

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，要求写一篇介绍韩国歌星朴载相的短文。本题所给材料比较详细。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第三人称，时态为一般现在时态，注意谓语动词的变化。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。
点评：做英语书面表达时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后多读多修改，我想一定会写出满意的文章来。