Question

19．"爸爸，怎么做才是爱国？"
"孩子，关爱家人、同学，勤奋学习，遵守交通规则，不乱扔垃圾…做好自己该做的事情，就是爱国．"
请根据以上对话，说谠在日常学习、生活中怎样做，才能体现我们的爱国情怀？
要求：
1．要点齐全，并适当发挥
2．词数：80词左右（开头已给出，不计人总词数）；
3．文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称．
Love Our Motherland
It's our duty to love our motherland．And what should we do？                                            

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
   obey the traffic rules while we are on the road．当我们在路上时要遵守交通规则．这是while引导的时间状语从句，当…时候． 
 高分句型二
   if we do our part，our motherland will certainly be better and more powerful 如果我们尽自己的一份力量，我们的祖国一定会更好更加强大．这是if引导的条件状语从句，主句是一般将来时，从句用的是一般现在时．

解答 Love Our Motherland
      It's our duty to love our motherland．And what should we do？We can do it in many ways．【开头点明主题】
First，we should love our family members and get on well with our classmates．Try our best to help the people in need．Second，as a student，to study hard is a must．It's quite important for us．Third，obey the traffic rules while we are on the road【高分句型一，注意时间状语从句的使用】．Fourth，we had better put the litter into the dustbin instead of throwing it about．Last but not least，we are supposed to care for the flowers，grass and trees around us  It's easy to make it．【正文部分详细介绍怎样做才能体现我们的爱国情怀】
    In a word，if we do our part，our motherland will certainly be better and more powerful【高分句型二，注意if引导的条件状语从句的使用】．【结尾紧扣主题】

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