Question

10．"中学生是否可以在校使用手机？"你班就此话题进行了讨论．请你根据以下记录表写一篇短文，陈述讨论结果，并发表你的观点．

Opinions	Reasons
Mobile phones should be used	surf the Internet for information play games for enjoyment …
Mobile phones shouldn't be used	send messages in class   use public phone school …．

要求
①短文应包括表中所给信息；②补全表中的理由，同时发表你的观点；③文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息；④词数：80一100个，开头已给出，不计入总词数．
Recently we h eld a discussio n about whether the students should use mobile phones at school or not．Some of us think _____________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
we can surf the Internet for information we need我们能上网查找我们需要的信息．
we need是省略了关系词that的定语从句，修饰information．
【高分句型二】
it's not a good idea to use mobile phones  at  school  because  it  makes a  difference  to improving our study在学校用手机不是一个好想法，因为对我们的成绩的提高有影响．
because引导的原因状语从句．

解答 Recently we held a discussio n about whether the students should use mobile phones at school or not．Some of us think mobile phones should be used at school．First，we can surf the Internet for information we need．【高分句型一】Second，with mobile phone we can play games for enjoyment in our free time．Finally，we can call our parents easily．（赞同）
      However，some other students don't think so．On one hand，some students send messages on mobile phones in class．On the other hand，we can use the school public phones．Besides，keeping a mobile phone costs money．（反对）
 In  my  opinion，it's not a good idea to use mobile phones  at  school  because  it  makes  a  difference  to improving our study【高分句型二】．（我的观点）

点评 提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体．同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点．