Question

10．我国中小学生早餐营养质量严重不足．为了培养同学们健康的饮食习惯，你班拟在5月20日--"中国学生营养日"召开班会，谈谈中国学生早餐营养质量不足的原因、后果及建议．请根据下表中提供的信息写一篇80个词左右的英文演讲稿．
注意：1、文中应包含所有要点，并适当发挥．
2、不能出现真实的校名和姓名．
3、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．

Reason	•have no time to prepare the breakfast •keep slim（苗条的） •…
Result	•feel tired and sleepy in class •fail in the exams •…
Your advice	•…

Good morning，everyone!
A recent survey shows that most of the school students eat an unhealthy breakfast．Why don't they have breakfast？Some studentswho get up too late choose to miss breakfast，for they have no time to eat breakfast．Others go to school without breakfast，because their parents are too busy to prepare the breakfast for them．Some girls eat nothing in the morning in order to keep slim．And some boys likes eating the food from the stands on their way to school．In their opinion，it's more convenient．
As a result，most of them are not in good health．They feel tired and sleepy in class，so they can't do well in their studies．Some even fail in the exams．
　In fact，having no breakfast is bad for our health．So what should we do？It's important for us to have enough sleep and get up early so that we can have time to enjoy a wonderful breakfast．What's more，we can have some fruit and milk at school if possible．
Hope you have a healthy lifestyle．Thank you for listening!

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是谈谈中国学生早餐营养质量不足的原因、后果及建议．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．原因；没时间准备，保持苗条
2．结果；课堂上疲倦，困倦，考试不及格
3．我的建议
常用到的重点短语：
too…to do sth 太…而不能做某事
prepare for准备
in order to 为了
as a result 结果
be bad for 对…不利
what's worse 更糟糕的是
【高分句型】
1．Some students①who get up too late choose to miss breakfast，②for they ③have no time to eat breakfast．
①who作为关系词的定语从句，修饰先行词students，who 作为从句的主语．
②for表示因为，引导原因状语从句．
③have no time to do sth 没时间做某事

2．Some girls eat nothing in the morning in order to keep slim．
in order to 为了，做目的状语，keep silm 保持苗条．
3．①It's important for us to have enough sleep and get up early②so that we can have time to enjoy a wonderful breakfast．
①it is+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．
②so that引导的目的状语从句．

解答 Good morning，everyone!
A recent survey shows that most of the school students eat an unhealthy breakfast．Why don't they have breakfast？Some students who get up too late choose to miss breakfast，for they have no time to eat breakfast．【高分句型】Others go to school without breakfast，because their parents are too busy to prepare the breakfast for them．Some girls eat nothing in the morning in order to keep slim．【高分句型】And some boys likes eating the food from the stands on their way to school．In their opinion，it's more convenient．（原因）
As a result，most of them are not in good health．They feel tired and sleepy in class，so they can't do well in their studies．Some even fail in the exams．（结果）
　In fact，having no breakfast is bad for our health．So what should we do？It's important for us to have enough sleep and get up early so that we can have time to enjoy a wonderful breakfast．【高分句型】What's more，we can have some fruit and milk at school if possible．（我的建议）
Hope you have a healthy lifestyle．Thank you for listening!

点评 在对于诸如此类文章的写作，学生要注意详略得当，做到有条理．学生在平时的练习、学习生活中要善于积累常用的表达多个好处的句型．．英语的写作过程中切忌使用重复的表达，对于不会表达的意思要学会替换，同时注意用平时在课本中或是阅读中积累的单词句型来自如的表达自己的意思，这样文章才能写出新意，写出文采．