Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你叫Mary,请根据提示给你的朋友Lily写一封电子邮件,告诉她你的上学方式。

提示：1.七点半离开家去上学；

2.走路(walk)到公交车站(bus stop)坐公交车去上学；

3.Mary家到学校有20公里，坐公交车大约花费(take)10分钟到学校

4.Mary很喜欢这段公交车旅程(bus ride)

要求：词数50—60字

Hi Lily,

How are you? Thanks for your e-mile. Let me tell you how I get to school.

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Yours,

Mary

Answer 1

【答案】

Hi Lily,

How are you? Thanks for your e-mile. Let me tell you how I get to school. I leave home and go to school at 7:30 every morning. First I walk to the bus stop and then take a bus to school. My home is about 20 kilometers from school. It takes me about 10 minutes to go to school by bus. I like this bus ride very much.

Yours,

Mary

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲式的给材料作文。根据中文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑的英文电子邮件，主要考查写作能力，也是对英语综合知识运用的考查，这就要求仔细分析所给提示，不要漏掉提示要点，可适当发挥，写出语言流畅，意思连贯的文章。时态是一般现在时，人称为第一人称。

写作亮点：这篇文章语言连贯，简洁明了；表达清楚、完整，层次分明。按照提示，交代了自己上学的方式。It takes me about 10 minutes to go to school by bus.这一句式运用的非常熟练。时态的运用，电子邮件的格式运用也很准确。