Question

14．假定你是阳光中学的学生李华，你校外籍教师Mr．Johnson两年的志愿教学期将满，即将回国，请你写一封道别信．请根据以下内容提示完成信件，可适当发挥．

Frank Johnson，American Teaching course：Spoken English Ways of teaching：lively；  interesting Personality：creative； hard-working； organized； Thanks and wishes：自拟

要求：
1文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
2 词数：90个左右．
Dear friend，
How time flies！
                                                                    
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
①As you always②made your lessons lively and interesting，I ③am really fond of your lessons．因为你总是让你的课堂生动有趣，我真的喜欢您的课．
①as因为，引导的原因状语从句．
②make+sth+adj让…怎样
③be fond of 喜欢…
【高分句型二】
①Even though you may go back to your own country，I will always②stay in touch with you．即使你要回到你的家乡，我会一直与你保持联系．
①even though即使，引导让步状语从句．
②stay in touch with sb 与某人保持联系．

解答 Dear Friend，
How time flies!Learning that you are leaving our school，I really feel sorry about it．It has been two years since you first came to our school．As you always made your lessons lively and interesting（教学方式），I am really fond of your lessons．【高分句型一】Moreover，you are very creative，hard-working and organized．（性格）With your help，I made rapid progress in my English speaking．Thank you a lot．And I have made up my mind to contribute to the society in the future just as you did to us．Even though you may go back to your own country，I will always stay in touch with you．【高分句型二】I wish you success for the future!（感谢和祝福）
Yours，又不听话，
Li Hua

点评 以提纲提供情景的作文．要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点．行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句．在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节．写作时，要注意谓语动词形式的变化．另外，还需要使用一些句型和短语，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅．