Question

Writing 12(2012 北京)

    根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、 不少于60词的短文。所给英文提示词语仅供选用。请不要写 出你的校名和姓名。

    生活中每个人都有过与他人分享的体验，如分享一本有趣 的书、一段难忘的经历、一个闪光的想法……

    现在，某英文报纸就分享(Sharing) 话题征文，请你投稿。描 述一次你与他人的经历，并谈谈你的感受

提示词语：sharewith...;experience;interest;learn;change;encourage;enjoy;happiness;confident 。

     

Answer 1

Writing 12

[写作提示]

1. 审题:文章应写成夹叙夹议类型，而且要先叙后议、多叙少议、 详叙精议。

2. 确定要点：

(1) 先以过去时回忆过去与人分享的经历，注意使用多种句式结 构，避免重复使用简单句，另外词汇要尽可能丰富；

(2) 结尾处谈对“分享”的感受，时态可转为现在时，可以用简短 的排比句式，以sharing作主语，会起到画龙点睛的效果。

[参考范文]

    I had an experience of sharing.When my family moved,I had to go to a new school and study in a new class.The first test made me so nervous that I failed. I got worried and felt helpless until one of my new classmates came up to me and asked softly if I was OK.After I told him about my problem,he gave me some advice.From then on,we got to know each other and shared our ideas,problems and happiness. We became good friends. Sharing with friends helped me bring back my confidence and fit in with others.