Question

你是我校九年级学生，在毕业典礼上，你将对自己三年来与同学相处，从中学到许多知识和做人道理，自己将努力工作实现梦想等情况，表达自己对老师和同学感激之情，写一篇英语发言稿。以下提示词可能对你有所帮助。
excited, happy,  It’s hard for sb to do sth, It’s kind of sb to do sth,  in the pass three years,
together, like, have fun, learn---from, succeed, study hard, graduation, keep on, achieve one’s dream, forget, last, ,forever, friendship.
Good morning, everyone,
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
That’s all, Thank you

Answer 1

Good morning,everyone,
It’s my honor to talk with all of you here.I feel so excited and so happy to speak here. It’s hard for me to believe that I’m leaving my dear teachers and classmates. It’s very kind of you to help me a lot. In the past three years,we have studied and lived together like a happy family. We have had fun together,too. I’ve learned a lot from you all. I have also learned that if I want to succeed, I must study hard first.After graduation,I will keep on working hard to achieve my dreams.I’ll never forget you.I hope our friendship will last forever.
That’s all, Thank you.

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第三人称，一般过去及现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如:it is adj for doing sth/to do sth做某事怎么样；have fun玩得开心；keep on doing sth坚持做某事等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。