Question

10．很多城市都正在创建文明城市． 文明城市的创建需要靠每个人的努力． 你在公共场所有没有看见一些不文明的行为呢？请你写一封倡议书，内容包括：
1）列举你在公共场所经常见到的两个不文明的行为．
2）提出文明准则，至少两条．
3）号召大家做一个文明的人．
要求：1）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名．
2）语句连贯，词数80个左右． 开头已经给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Citizens，
As we all know，our city is aiming at being a civilized one．Everybody should make an effort．
However，some people still behave badly in public．For example，some people cut in line while getting on buses or getting into cinemas．Besides，some men often smoke in non-smoking areas in public．It's really bad for other people's health．To make our city a better one，I think we should always obey the rules such as waiting in line while shopping and keep our mobile phones off during the meeting．What's more，we should never litter in public．
Let's try our best and be a polite person，no matter where we are．．
Thank you all．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是写一封倡议书号召大家做一个文明的人．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称和第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1）列举你在公共场所经常见到的两个不文明的行为．
2）提出文明准则，至少两条．
3）号召大家做一个文明的人．
常用到的重点短语：
cut in line 插队
in public公共场所
be bad for对…有害
obey the rules 遵守规则
what's more 再者
try one's best to do sth 竭尽全力做某事
【高分句型】
1．①To make our city a better one，I think②we should always ③obey the rules④such as waiting in line ⑤while shopping and keep our mobile phones off during the meeting．
①动词不定式做目的状语．
②省略了引导词that的宾语从句，作为think的宾语．
③obey the rules 遵守规则
④such as 例如，wait in line 排队等候
⑤while shopping省略句，完整表达while we are shopping．引导时间状语从句．

2．①Let's②try our best and be a polite person，③no matter where we are．
①let sb do sth 让某人做某事
②try one's best to do sth 竭尽全力做某事
③no matter where 无论哪里，引导让步状语从句．

解答 Dear Cit izens，
     As we all know，our city is aiming at being a civilized one．Everybody should make an effort．．
     However，some people still behave badly in public．For example，some people cut in line while getting on buses or getting into cinemas．Besides，some men often smoke in non-smoking areas in public．（列举公共场所经常见到的两个不文明的行为）It's really bad for other people's health．To make our city a better one，I think we should always obey the rules such as waiting in line while shopping and keep our mobile phones off during the meeting．【高分句型】What's more，we should never litter in public．（提出文明准则）
     Let's try our best and be a polite person，no matter where we are．【高分句型】（号召大家做一个文明的人）
Thank you all．

点评 本篇作文由于提纲材料本身决定了写作对象、范围、目的、体裁等，命题者的意图往往较容易领悟，考生在审题上一般不会出现障碍．可根据内容要点提示运用相关的句型结构灵活的展开作文．考生需注意不要逐词逐句地进行翻译，所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯．