Question

13．5月11日母亲节那天，你们班同学用不同的方式为妈妈庆祝节日．请根据下列所给信息，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你认为哪一种方式最好，并简单说明理由

●有人花很多钱为妈妈买礼物．

●有人自制礼物或贺卡给妈妈．

●有人帮妈妈做家务．

●你的看法和理由．

注意：1）词数：80～100．
2）文中不要提及自己的姓名、学校等相关信息．
3）无需写标题，内容可适当发挥．
参考词汇：pocket money零花钱．
May 11th was Mothers'Day．My classmates celebrated this special day in different ways．Some of them spent lots of pocket money buying expensive gifts for their mothers，or made cards and gifts by themselves．Some students did as much housework as possible to help their mothers．
All the ways above are OK．Whatever we do，thanksgiving is the most important．Our mothers have given us so much love and care，so we should give them more in return．What's more，working hard and being good kidsare also good ways to make our mothers happy．Let's take action to express our love to our mothers heartedly and faithfully．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇表格作文．内容谈谈为妈妈庆祝节日的不同方式以及自己的看法．时态主要为一般过去时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
本文的写作要点：
1．同学们庆祝妈妈节日的不同方式
2．我的看法和理由

常用到的重点短语：
in different ways 以不同的方式
spend 金钱+doing 花费金钱做某事
as …as possible 尽可能的
in return 作为回报
What's more 更有甚者
take action to do sth 采取行动做某事

高分句型：
一、Some students ①did as much housework as possible ②to help their mothers．
①as …as possible尽可能怎么样的，中间加形容词/副词或名词．
加形容词/副词：When he heard the news，he ran as quickly as possible．（当他听到这个消息时，他尽快地跑）
加名词：do as much homework as possible（做尽可能多的作业），sell as many apples as possible（卖尽可能多的苹果）；
②动词不定式to help their mothers作为目的状语．非谓语动词的运用．

二、What's more，working hard and being good kids are also good ways to make our mothers happy．
What's more更有甚者，作为插入语，working hard and being good kids 两个动名词短语作为主语，谓语用复数．

解答 May 11th was Mothers'Day．My classmates celebrated this special day in different ways．Some of them spent lots of pocket money buying expensive gifts for their mothers，or made cards and gifts by themselves．Some students did as much housework as possible to help their mothers．（高分句型）（庆祝节日的不同方式）
   All the ways above are OK．Whatever we do，thanksgiving is the most important．Our mothers have given us so much love and care，so we should give them more in return．What's more，working hard and being good kids are also  good ways to make our mothers happy．（高分句型）Let's take action to express our love to our mothers heartedly and faithfully．（我的看法和理由）

点评 这是一篇所给材料比较详细的表格类作文，我们要做的就是把这些内容用正确的英语表达出来．动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，可有适当发挥．在写作时要注意时态，人称和固定词组的搭配，要注意语言的规范性，做到上下文联系紧密、条理清楚，符合逻辑关系．