Question

最近网民热议“中国式过马路”现象，宁波市开展了以“文明出行，从不闯红灯做起”为主题的交通安全宣传月活动。请你根据下图提示，用英文写一篇短文，谈谈作为宁波市民应该如何文明出行。
注意：
1.文中应包含所有要点，并可适当发挥。
2.词数：80词左右。开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

As we all know, traffic safety plays an important part in our daily life. But what can we do to keep safe? Here are some suggestions.
As walkers,                                                                  
                                                                               
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                               
If everyone does so, people are sure to enjoy their life better.

Answer 1

As we all know, traffic safety plays an important part in our daily life. But what can we do to keep safe? Here are some suggestions.
As walkers, you should walk at the side of the road. Always remember to walk on the zebra crossing and look left and right carefully before you cross the road. Never try to jump the red light. It’s dangerous. If you drive, you should slow down at the traffic lights. You must always wear a seat belt. Never drive cars after drinking and you shouldn’t use your mobile phones while driving. It may cause serious traffic accidents. While you are waiting for a bus, please stand in line and wait for your turn. Don’t push others. What’s more, give your seat to the people who need it most.
If everyone does so, I think people are sure to enjoy their life better.

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们通过观察这幅图来描述一下，在过马路的时候，我们应该注意哪些事情，怎样文明过马路。配合图画，还有一些提纲的东西和一些关键词，来帮助我们组织文章。通过审题，我们主要从三个方面来阐述，行人、司机和乘客。同学们要发挥自己的想象力，并结合我们日常生活中的熟悉的一些交通规则来充实文章的内容。本文应主要使用第三人称，一般现在时。写作时还要注意行文连贯。
【亮点说明】这篇范文全面的描述了图画中的内容，并利用题目中所给的提纲从行人、司机和乘客三个方面进行了阐述，要点全面，内容充实。文章中使用了一些较好的句式和短语，如Always remember to walk on the zebra crossing and look left and right carefully before you cross the road.、If you drive, you should slow down at the traffic lights、Never drive cars after drinking and you shouldn’t use your mobile phones while driving、While you are waiting for a bus, please stand in line and wait for your turn.等。并且文章中一些情态动词和祈使句的使用为文章增加了力量。