Question

8．如图是近期初三学生所热议的话题，请描述图中现象，并就此现象表发表一下自己的观点．
要求：1 不得出现真实的校名、姓名．2时态得体，100词左右．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
   Some students think we should buy a proper gift for our school and thank our teachers for helping and taking care of us．一些学生认为我们应该为学校买一件合适的礼物，感谢老师们的帮助和照顾．这是一个宾语从句，I think是主句，后面的是宾语从句．
高分句型二
at the same time we can also sweep roads，clean streets so that our city will become more beautiful．同时，我们也可以清扫道路，清扫街道，使我们的城市变得更加美丽．so that以便于，引导目的状语从句．

解答 How to do a meaningful thing？
           We'll leave school soon．My classmates are discussing how to do a meaningful thing before leaving school．【开头点明主题】Some students think we should buy a proper gift for our school and thank our teachers for helping and taking care of us【高分句型一，注意宾语从句的使用】．Others think we should buy pencils，pens，notebooks，schoolbags and some other school things for the children in the disaster areas and poor areas．【一些学生的观点】
          I think we can also organize the students to help the old take care of their daily life，such as washing，cooking and doing housework，at the same time we can also sweep roads，clean streets so that our city will become more beautiful．【高分句型二，注意so that．句型的使用】
          As students，we should thank those who help us．We should help those in need and do a bit for our society．【自己的观点】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，多阅读此类题材，将词汇归类整理；动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词．写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．