Question

15．使用所给的词语，编写一个意义相对完整的语段．
提示词：dream，musician，practice，early，with
要求：1．使用全部提示词，并在语段中用下划波浪线"﹏﹏﹏"标出提示词；
2．语段具有一个相对合理的主题意义；
3．词数为100词左右．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I'm going to be a musician player like Lang Lang when I grow up当我长大了我将要成为一名像郎朗一样的音乐家．
when引导的时间状语从句
【高分句型二】
To make my dream come true．I get up early to practice playing the piano every day为了实现梦想，我每天早起练习弹钢琴．
To make my dream come true，to practice playing the piano 动词不定式做目的状语．

解答 My dream
Everyone has dreams．I have a dream，too．I'm going to be a musician player like Lang Lang when I grow up．【高分句型一】（梦想是什么）
I started to play the piano at the age of four．At first，I didn't like the piano at all and I wanted to give up．But my parents often encouraged me，"Never give up，son!You can do it!"With the help of the piano teacher and my parents，I began to make great progress in playing the piano and love it very much．Now I can play the piano pretty well and my parents and the piano teacher are very pleased with me．（为什么）To make my dream come true．I get up early to practice playing the piano every day．【高分句型二】I believe I can do it．（怎样实现）
What's your dream？Can you tell me？

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