Question

17．假如你是李华．你家离学校15公里，你每月坐公共汽车回一次家，从学校到家需要20分钟．你有一个非常要好的朋友，他/她比你大三个月，但你却比他/她高，你们两人都擅长英语．你们将去北京度假．你最近交了一位加拿大笔友Jack．现请你写一封E-mail向笔友Jack介绍上述情况，注意：
1E-mail 应包含上述内容，但不要逐条翻译．2 词数为80左右．3E-mail的开头和结尾已写好．
Dear Jack，
I am very happy to write to you．My name is Li Hua．I am a student．My home is 15 kilometers away from the school，I take the bus back home once a month，it takes me 20 minutes to school．I have a very good friend，her name is WangFang．We are in the same class，she is 3 months older than me but I am taller than her，both of us are good at English．We often do to school together and wealways help each other．We will go to Beijing for vacation this summmer because there are many places of interest．Would you like to join us？
                                    Yours，Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
it takes me 20 minutes to school 我花20分钟上学．it takes sb．some time to do sth．花费某人时间某事．
高分句型二
We will go to Beijing for vacation this summmer because there are many places of interest我们将去北京度假，因为有许多名胜古迹．这是because引导的原因状语从句，因为…．

解答 Dear Jack，
I am very happy to write to you．My home is 15 kilometers away from the school，I take the bus back home once a month，it takes me 20 minutes to school．【高分句型一，注意it takes sb．some time to do sth．的使用】【要点一，简要介绍自己】I have a very good friend，her name is WangFang．We are in the same class，she is 3 months older than me but I am taller than her，both of us are good at English．We often do to school together and we always help each other．【要点二，简要介绍朋友】We will go to Beijing for vacation this summmer because there are many places of interest【高分句型二，注意状语从句的使用】．Would you like to join us？【要点三，简要介绍暑假计划】
Yours，
Li Hua．

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．