Question

书面表达（15 分）

假如你是赵辉， 就个人爱好带来的困惑给英国朋友Jack发电子邮件进行交流并请求帮助。

要点：

赵辉	爱好	对集邮感兴趣，经常和朋友交流
困惑	得不到老师的理解
观点	个人爱好有助于学习 ……
老师	观点	时间应花在功课上，成绩就是一切

注意 : 1.词数：80个左右（已给内容不计入总词数）

2.内容必须包括上表中的要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐字逐句翻译;

3. 文中不得出现真实的地名，校名和人名。

Dear Jack,

I am writing to tell you about my problem with my teacher. I don’t know how to deal with it and would like your help.

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What shall I do ? Can you offer me some suggestions ?I am looking forward to your reply.

Best wishes.

Zhao Hui

 

Answer 1

Dear Jack,

I am writing to tell you about my problem with my teacher. I don’t know how to deal with it and would like your help.

You know I am crazy about collecting stamps. In my spare time I often go to the library to find something to read. This makes my teacher very angry. To him , good marks are everything and I should spend more time on my lessons, even at weekends.

I think healthy hobbies are helpful for our studies. If I can achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobby , it will be of great value to my future development. But I don’t think my teacher understands me. I feel bad about that.

What shall I do ? Can you offer me some suggestions ?I am looking forward to your reply.

Best wishes.

Zhao Hui

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇利用表格的给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细：要求介绍自己的爱好，及困惑，并阐述自己的爱好的观点，及老师的观点。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称和第三人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】

这篇短文思路清晰，逻辑性强。首先表达自己的爱好，然后描述老师的观点看法，表达自己的困惑。之后阐述自己的观点，请求帮助。适当的连词，流畅的语言，为文章增色不少.

考点：表格作文