Question

书面表达。（10分）

请结合自己的实际情况，以How to Keep Healthy?为题写一篇80词左右的短文。

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

How to Keep Healthy?

We need a good health, but how to keep healthy? First, we should have good habits. We should go to bed early and get up early. It’s bad for us to stay up late. We’d better have enough sleep. Second, we need to eat healthy food, such as vegetables and fruits. Water is important and we should drink enough every day. Wash hands before meals. Do not smoke and do not throw rubbish anywhere. Finally, if you do not feel good, you'd better go to see a doctor right now.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文要求我们How to Keep Healthy?为题写一篇短文。我们首先要确定短文的写作内容，主要包括：一、我们应该有好习惯，如早睡早起，吃健康的食品等。二、喝足够的水，不舒服要及时看医生等。主要内容虽然已经确定，但是很多其他内容都需要我们自己去充实，让它变得完整、合理，内容丰富，这就需要花费我们的想象力，以及我们平时积累的知识。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者根据题目要求,讲述了如何保持健康。层次非常的清晰。文章中用了一些比较好的句型，如Second, we need to eat healthy food, such as vegetables and fruits. Finally, if you do not feel good, you'd better go to see a doctor right now.等。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。

考点：话题类作文。