Question

13．以"My ideal school"为题，写一篇词数不少于100词的短文．必须包含以下要点：
1．我的理想学校九点半上课，下午三点结束．
2．我们有一个小时的时间吃饭．
3．我们每天都有体育课，因为它是有趣的和对健康有益．
4．在我们学校一边有一个公园，另一边有一个购物中心．
5．我们有一个大的图书馆，里面有许多有用的书．
6．我们每天只有半小时的家庭作业．
7．每个月，我们都进行一次学校旅行．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
We have a PE class every day，because it's interesting and good for health．我们每天都有体育课，因为它很有趣并且有益健康．
because引导的原因状语从句
be good for有益于
句型二：
If I can study in my ideal school I will be very happy．如果我能在我理想的学校学习，我会非常高兴．
if引导的条件状语从句，遵从主将从现的时态．

解答 My ideal school
My ideal school day will start at 9：30 a．m．because I like sleeping．（理想学校）The school day finishes at 3：30 p．m．We will have more free time to do other things．（理想学校）We have an hour for lunch．（吃饭时间）There is a big and beautiful dining hall．We can eat tasty meals，chat and have a rest in it．We have a PE class every day，because it's interesting and good for health．（每天有体育课）【高分句型一】There is a park on one side of our school and a big shopping mall on the other．（有公园和购物中心）We can go to play in the park and go shopping at weekends．We have a big library，there are a lot of useful books in it．（有大图书馆）We only have half an hour of homework every day．（半小时的家庭作业）Every month，we go on a school trip．（每月一次旅游）It's interesting．If I can study in my  ideal school  I will be very happy．【高分句型二】

点评 根据所给提纲，正确运用单词，所学语法，构成了一篇布局合理，逻辑清楚的文章，把自己想象中的学校介绍的明明白白．用所含要点正确表达所要表达的意思．