Question

19．写一篇短文，谈谈你小学与初中在外貌，性格，爱好以及学习方面的变化．
要求：1 词数80左右          2 条理清楚，语意连贯
My life has changed so much．                                                    ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 I was fat and short when I was in Primary school．我在小学时很胖，个子很矮．这是when引导的时间状语从句，当…时候．
高分句型二
 My parents and my teachers are both pleased with me我的父母和我的老师都对我很满意．be pleased with对…满意．

解答 My life has changed so much．【开篇点明主题】．I was fat and short when I was in Primary school．【高分句型一，注意时间状语从句的使用】At that time，I was interested in computer games and I spent most of time on it．My parents were worried about me．Now，I like sports and I often play basketball with my classmates after school．So I become taller and stronger than before．I like reading，too．I usually go to the library to read some interesting books．Good habits help me to study better and keep healthier．My parents and my teachers are both pleased with me【高分句型二，注意be pleased with的使用】．【正文部分详细介绍变化】

点评 动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题．注意不要遗漏要点，句子要通顺连贯，没有语法错误．