Question

【题目】书面表达。
假如你是Lin Tao，你的笔友Jet从英国给你发了E-mail， 介绍了他在英国学校中的学习情况以及他本人的一些爱好。 请你给他回复一个E-mail，谈一谈你在学校里的学习情况，如你在几年级，都学什么科目，你最喜欢哪门课，为什么，你最喜欢哪项体育运动，什么原因等等。
要求：1. 文中不要出现真实的姓名，校名等。2. 词数：70以上，文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入词数之中。
Dear Jet,
I am in Grade Seven in a middle school this year.
Do you think so?
Yours,
Lin Tao

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jet,

I am in Grade Seven in a middle school this year. I have many subjects. They are English, biology, history and so on. I like English very much because it's very interesting and useful. Every morning I read English and often see English movies in the evening.

I have four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon. After class, I have sports. My favorite sport is basketball. I think it's relaxing. My favorite basketball player is Yao Ming. I know you play basketball well. Maybe we will have a basketball game someday. Do you think so?

Yours,

Lin Tao

【解析】这篇作文要求我们根据所给信息，来介绍一下自己的学习情况及喜欢的体育运动。作者按照题目的要求，首先介绍了自己的基本情况，在很多的科目当中最喜欢英语，然后介绍了自己是怎么学习英语的。接着有描写了课程情况和喜欢的体育运动，最后介绍了自己最喜欢的运动是篮球。这是一篇非常优秀的作文结构清晰，要点全面。而且作者在写作时，并不是完全按照题目中给出的顺序，逐句翻译的，而是将这些信息进行了整合，让意思关联紧密的放在一起表达，这一点很好。短文中的语言合乎英语的表达规范，而且作者还使用了一些较好的句式，增强了文章的连贯性。如I like English very much because it's very interesting and useful. 及I think it's relaxing.等。