Question

文段表达。

根据中文提示和英文书信内容，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的回信，信的开头和结尾已给出，其字数不计入所完成的回信内。请不要写出你的姓名和学校。

假设你叫杨洋。是加拿大中学生Paula的笔友，下面是你收到的她的电子邮件。请你根据她来信的内容写一封回信。针对她的问题，谈谈你的看法，同时提出一些帮助她解决问题的建议。

　　I can understand your feeling．But I don’t think it is right for you to do things like that．Don’t worry．Here are some suggestions for you．

　　As a student, it’s important for you to study hard to get more knowledge．So I think doing homework is necessary and useful．You should do your homework first．If it is not too late, you can play computer games for a while．Remember to go to bed as early as possible, then you won’t feel tired the next day．

　　In class, you need to listen to the teachers carefully and take notes．What’s more, it’s important to take part in class activities, try to answer at least two questions each class．When you have any problems, ask your teachers or classmates for help．I ’m sure you’ll make great progress and pass the final exam．Good luck!

　　Dear Paula：

　　I’m sorry to hear you are in trouble now．__________________ I believe if you work hard you’ll make some progress．Good luck!

yours Paula

Dear Paula,

Yours,

Yang yang

Answer 1

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解析：

　　One possible version：

　　I’m sorry to hear you are in trouble now．I can understand your feeling．But I don’t think it is right for you to do things like that．Don’t worry．Here are some suggestions for you：

　　As a student, it’s important for you to study hard to get more knowledge．So I think doing homework is necessary and useful．You should do your homework first．If it is not too late, you can play computer games for a while．Remember to go to bed as early as possible, then you won’t feel tired the next day．

　　In class, you need to listen to the teachers carefully and take notes．What’s more, it’s important to take part in class activities, try to answer at least two questions each class．If you have any problems, ask your teachers or classmates for help．I ’m sure you’ll make great progress and pass the final exam．Good luck!

　　书面表达评分标准：

　　第一档：(15-13分)

　　完全符合题目要求，内容完整、丰富、健康。使用多种句型结构和丰富的词汇。语言通顺，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性。

　　第二档：(12-9分)

　　基本符合题目要求，内容基本完整。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯，表达基本清楚。虽然有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。

　　第三档：(8-5分)

　　部分内容符合题目要求，内容不够完整。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺，表达不够清楚，影响整体理解。

　　第四档：(4-0分)

　　与题目有关的内容不多，只能简单拼凑提示词语，所写内容难以理解。