Question

书面表达（满分20分）

李梅同学感到学习英语很困难。比如，她很腼腆，不敢在别人面前讲英语；记忆单词时，记得快，忘得也快；在语法方面也总犯错误......请你以Amy的名义给她提出一些关于学好英语的建议，使她能学好英语。开头和结尾已给出。不计入总词数。

要求：（1）中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；

（2）80词左右；

（3）文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名。

Dear Limei,

I know many students have the same problem like you. ___________________

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Take it easy! If you use the right way of learning English, you are sure to make progress. Best wishes!

Your friend,

Amy

 

Answer 1

Dear Limei,

Most students have the same problem like you. In fact, English is not hard to learn, but the way of learning it is important. First, it’s a good idea to listen to the teacher carefully and answer the questions actively to practise your spoken English as often as possible in class. Second, it’s better to remember four or five words a day. At the same time, you should do some exercises and try to correct your mistakes in order not to make the same mistakes again and again.

Take it easy! If you use the right way of learning English, you are sure to make progress. Best wishes!

Your friend,

Amy

【解析】

试题分析：短文是一封信，是给李梅提出一些关于学好英语的建议，使她能学好英语。所以句子的时态应该用一般现在时，主语用第二人称you，要注意句子的要通顺，不要漏掉要点。

【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语和句式，增加了文章的色彩，如：as often as possible ；It is +名词或形容词+to do sth这里it是形式主语，真正的主语是后面的动词不定式。用了一些连词如：if，but等，使句子结构更加复杂了，增加了文章的亮点。

考点：提纲作文。