Question

假如你是来自于美国的Jeff，现在在中国学习，请你给在美国的祖母写一封信，介绍一下你在中国新结交的好朋友Wang Lin。

注意：

1. 所写内容必须有如下介绍：

Wang Lin是个比我外向的人，他对我很友善，给了我很多帮助。

Wang Lin比我矮，但很喜欢运动，我们现在每周在一起打两次篮球。

我比Wang Lin聪明一点，但Wang Lin比我用功很多。每次考试，我们都能取得好成绩。

2. 开头部分已写好，你只需接着写，内容可以适当补充和发挥。

3. 词数：不少于75。

Dear grandma,

How is everything going? Now I am studying in China. I have a good friend.

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Yours,

Jeff

 

Answer 1

Dear grandma,

How is everything going? Now I am studying in China. I have a good friend. His name is Wang Lin. He is a Chinese boy. He is more outgoing than me, and he is very friendly to me. At school, he often helps me a lot and I like him very much. Although he is shorter than me, he likes sports very much and his favorite sport is basketball. I like basketball, too. We play basketball twice a week. As for study, I think I am a little smarter than him, but he works much harder than me. Both of us can get good grades in every exam.

Yours,

Jeff

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文作者主要与好朋友王林的不同，全文主要用一般现在时态。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如more outgoing， is very friendly to，a lot ，twice a week，As for study， a little，Both of us 等短语；文中多次运用比较状语如more outgoing than me, shorter than me，a little smarter than him；让步状语从句 Although he is shorter than me。文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

考点：提纲作文。