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  现在学生们都是90后，对90后学生普遍具备的优点进行阐述（至少3点），可适当发挥。另外，作为一名90后学生，请结合你自己和周围同学的表现，列举至少2点不足之处进行描述。最后， 请根据你自己的感悟，对即将开始初中生活的新生提出你的建议。

不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整。

As post 90s students, we have so many advantages.                                

 

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【答案】

  As post 90s students, we have so many advantages. We are usually kind and helpful. When someone is in trouble, we always give him or her a hand. We are also energetic. We like to do sports . Most of us work hard in class and play happily.

  On the other hand, we also have some disadvantages. To tell you the truth, some of us are a little impolite. Sometimes we can’t express our opinions in a correct ways. We are so careless that we often make some mistakes in our studies and lives.

  As post 90s students who will enter a middle school, I think you need to get used to school life as quickly as you can. You should work hard and take an active part in all kinds of activities. Boys and girls, the future is up to us to create.

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