Question

【题目】假如你是李华，请你针对信中提到的问题提出合理的建议，并同复一封邮件。词数：60-80。

Dear Sir,

I'm writing this letter to you because I'm in trouble now. I'm so worried about my daughter, Lisa. She is getting fat these days. She doesn’t like to eat fruit or vegetables and never exercises. She just likes junk food. She almost eats candy every day, so she has a bad toothache. Also, she doesn't have breakfast because she usually gets up too late. I really worry about her health. She's only thirteen. What should I do? Could you please give me some good advice or suggestions?

Yours

Marina

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Marina,

I'm sorry to hear that there is something wrong with your daughter. But don't worry about that. I think you can cook some delicious food and vegetables for her breakfast. You can buy some fruit every day and ask her not to eat too much junk food, especially candy, because that's bad for her health. You can take her to a dentist. And also she should do more exercise with you every morning. You know a good habit can help her a lot. I hope these ideas will be helpful.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文是要求写一封电子邮件，写作时注意要写信的格式。要求假如你是李华，请你针对信中提到的问题提出合理的建议。动笔前要认真阅读电子邮件，写作时需回答邮件内所提问题，可适当发挥。仔细阅读书信，找出他女儿的问题（一直变胖，偏食，不爱吃蔬菜和水果，从不锻炼，…牙不好，不吃早饭等），然后根据问题给出建议。根据内容可知本文时态是一般现在时，使用建议性句型（You can…，You could…，You should/may，Why not do sth.等，）。写作时，列好提纲，注意使用连词，句型、句式，使文章整体意思连贯，表达流畅。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写，语法错误（时态，主谓一致等）。