Question

书面表达（本题共10分）
假如你是李华，请围绕以下几个方面给你的笔友Tom写封信，谈谈你期末考试后假期的打算。 （开头和结尾已给出）
1. 经过繁忙的复习、考试后，想在假期中休息一下；做自己喜欢做的事……
2. 多与父母交流，帮助做家务。
3. 参加社会实践（如：帮助老人、残疾人(disabled)等），增加对社会的了解。  
注意：1. 文中不能出现自己的姓名。2. 字数：80词左右(已给出的句子不计入总词数)。
DearTom,
How are yougettingonthesedays?I’vejust finishedmyfinalexam.          
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                                
                                                                              
                                                                               
Best wishes!
Yours,
LiHua

Answer 1

Dear Tom,  
How are you getting on these days? I’ve just finished my final exam. After working hard for a long time, I really want to have a good rest during the winter vacation. First, I’m going to watch some interesting movies and read some good books. Then, it’s time to communicate with my parents. I wish to share my happiness and sadness with them. Besides, I plan to help do some housework. At last, I hope to be a volunteer, helping the old and disabled as much as possible. In this way, I can know about the world better.
By the way, how will you spend your vacation?
Best wishes!

试题分析：对于书信的文体，要注意与对方的互动就行进行面对面对话一样，所以结尾可以问问他是如何安排的。本文中首先对考试后自己想休息一下进行总的描写，然后分三到四点内容进行讲述我要做些什么，对最后一点做法的意义进行一下说明，这样体现出详略得当，最后询问他会如何安排，显得亲切得体。
点评：本文难度不大，写作条理性要把握好，对于要做的几件事情，写的过程中通过变换句式和用词上来提高语言的美度。在一件事情写完后要用上表关系的连接词，或平时积累的各类表递进、并列的连词来是文章富于活力。在平时的练习中要多去背诵范文，对表达好的句子，短语要进行积累，并默写，考试前再集中看一下，这样做到有备无患。