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5．你校将于近期举办一场主题i"怎样成为一名受欢迎的学生"的演讲比赛，假如你是王华，请根据下面的要点和要求，以"How to be a popular student？"为题，写一篇80词左右的英语演讲稿．文章的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总次数．
要点：1．衣着整洁，常常微笑；
2．诚实善良，乐于助人；
3．懂得与他人分享；
4．其它．
要点：1．内容完整，语言流畅，不要逐句翻译，自由地适当发挥．
2．短文中不能出现真实姓名，校名和其它真实信息．
How  to be a popular student？
Hello，everyone!I am Wang Hua…        ．
That's all，Thank you for your listening．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．以"How to be a popular student？"为题写一篇英语演讲稿，时态以一般现在时为主．人称主要为第一人称．
    写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．本题考生可从四个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．衣着整洁，常常微笑；
2．诚实善良，乐于助人；
3．懂得与他人分享；
4．（可自由发挥）做一个好的听众，并且学习用功，成绩好．
重点短语：
受到…的欢迎 be popular with
衣着整洁dress well
不仅…而且…not only …but also …
更重要的是What's more
遇到麻烦 in trouble
高分句型：
1．If we can do this，others will think we are easy to get along with．如果我们做到这一点，别人就会认为我们很好相处．
if引导条件状语从句时，主句用一般将来时，从句用一般现在时表将来
 2．It's also important to be good listeners．做一个好的听众也是很重要的．
It's+形容词+to do  做某事…it作形式主语
3．What's more，we should be helpful，and always try to help people who are in trouble．更重要的是，我们应该乐于助人，尽量去帮助那些遇到困难的人．
who引导定语从句，修饰表人的先行词people，表示"遇到困难的人"

解答 How  to be a popular student？
     Hello，everyone!I am Wang Hua．Most students want to be popular with others，but not everyone can achieve this goal．How to be a popular student？In fact，it is very simple．
     First，we should keep ourselves stay in good shape and dress well．Because of this，we will not only look better but also feel better．In addition，we should always smile and we should also be honest．If we can do this，others will think we are easy to get along with（高分句型）．（衣着整洁，常微笑，诚实）
   It's also important to be good listeners（高分句型）．In this way，people would like to talk with us about their problems．What's more，we should be helpful，and always try to help people who are in trouble（高分句型）．It's necessary to be active and warm-hearted．（做一个好的听众，乐于助人）Of course，as a student，we should work hard and know how to share．（学习用功，懂得分享） If we can do all of the above，we will make friends and be more popular．
    That's all，Thank you for your listening．

点评 以提纲提供情景的作文．要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点．行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句．在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节．写作时，要先确定好时态，再注意谓语动词形式的变化．另外，还需要使用一些句型和短语，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅．