Question

上个星期天晚上，你和家人一起去看京剧。谈谈去之前你的心情及看过之后的体会。词数80个左右。

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Last Sunday evening, my father, mother and I went to see Beijing Opera ...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Last Sunday evening, my father, mother and I went to see Beijing Opera. I was looking forward to seeing it, because I heard that it was our national opera with a history of 200 years. It expresses Chinese culture. It’s full of famous stories, beautiful facial paintings, wonderful gestures and fighting. On the night before we started, I felt so excited that I couldn’t sleep well. When we got to the theater, I found there were so many people. They looked very excited, too. Then I had a nice evening there. After seeing it, I think it is really wonderful.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是话题作文，给出的材料很少，只提到了看京剧，需要学生自己组织材料，在动笔前先列出作文提纲，一定要注意动词的时态，写出看京剧前后的感受，可以适当发挥。要用一些过渡词或过渡句子来使文章衔接自然。

【亮点说明】本文用了一些短语或句式，如：I was looking forward to seeing it, because I heard that it was our national opera with a history of 200 years. It’s full of famous stories, beautiful facial paintings, wonderful gestures and fighting. On the night before we started, I felt so excited that I couldn’t sleep well.等，句中用了一些连词如：because，when，so…that等。提醒学生平时注意积累一些短语或句式。

考点：话题作文。