Question

【题目】书面表达

武汉东湖绿道是国内首条城区内5A级旅游景区绿道。本周末你们班将去东湖绿道参加步行活动。请用英语里一份口头通知。

内容要点如下：

1. 周六上午8点在学校大门口集合；

2. 最好乘公共交通工具出行，而不是让父母开车送你到校；

3. 不要随处扔垃圾.请自带垃圾袋, 或将垃圾扔进垃圾箱；

4. 步行活动大约需要两小时。五点乘地铁返校；

5. 补充一至两点个人想法或建议。

注意：

1. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

2. 词数60-80；

3. 内容连贯，不要逐条翻译；

4.开头已给出，不计入词数。

参考词汇：trash bag 垃圾袋 public transportation公共交通

My dear fellows，

This weekend, our class are going to join the Public Walk on the East Lake Greenway.

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Answer 1

【答案】My dear fellows,

This weekend, our class are going to join the Public Walk on the East Lake Greenway.

We will meet at the school gate at eight on Saturday morning. It' s better to take public transportation instead of having your parents drive you to school.Besides, don' t throw rubbish everywhere. Please bring your own trash bags or throw the rubbish into the bins. The activity will take us two hours and we will take the subway back to school at 5 p.m.

I think the activity is very meaningful and it can help us to realize the importance of environmental protection.

【解析】

本文是武汉东湖绿道的步行活动类材料作文，要求根据内容要点来写作。学生首先要认真阅读材料中给出的短语及相关信息,认真审题,确定文章的中心。在写作的文章具有一定的连贯性,还应注意使用一些连接词,使文章的表达更有逻辑性和条理性。写作时还要注意:1.书写规范；2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯；3.写完后要认真检查是否有漏写要点,有无拼写错误等。高分句型：It' s better to take public transportation instead of having your parents drive you to school.与其让你的父母开车送你上学，不如乘公共交通工具。Besides, don' t throw rubbish everywhere.此外，不要到处乱扔垃圾。Please bring your own trash bags or throw the rubbish into the bins.请自带垃圾袋或将垃圾扔进垃圾箱。The activity will take us two hours and we will take the subway back to school at 5 p.m.这次活动将花费我们两个小时，我们将在下午5点乘地铁回学校。I think the activity is very meaningful and it can help us to realize the importance of environmental protection.我认为这个活动是非常有意义的，它可以帮助我们认识到环境保护的重要性。