Question

假如你叫刘英，刚度假回来。请写信给你的美国笔友Jack，介绍你的北京7日游活动。字数要求：80字左右。

7—day Beijing Tour Things to see and do visit the Palace Museum and Tian’ anmen Square take a Hutong Tour and have Beijing roast duck in Quanjude climb the Great Wall visit the Summer Palace 5.  go shopping in Wangfujin street Weather Hot and rainy

Dear Jack,
                                                              
Yours,
Liu Ying

Answer 1

Dear Jack,  
I’m so glad to learn that you will come to Beijing . I have planned a seven-day trip for you.
I’m going to show you to visit the Palace Museum and Tian’ anmen Square. We can take a walk and enjoy the beautiful views there. And I will be on a visit to Beijing hutong, which have a long history .  If the weather is fine, we will climb the Great Wall , where we can overlook the views. The summer place is a good place to visit because it belonged to the emperor. I will take you to have Beijing roast duck in Quanjude, which is well-known to all.  Besides, we can do some shopping in the wangfujing street. 
Are you pleased with my plan? I hope you will have a wonderful time in Beijing .
Looking forward to meeting you ！
Yours
Liu Ying

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【亮点说明】本文出现一些常见短语，如be on a visit to 参观,be pleased with ,对…… 感到满意，have a good time,玩得愉快，look forward t o doing盼望做某事。Be well-known to sb ,众所周知。I will take you to have Beijing roast duck in Quanjude, which is well-known to all. 这句话中出现非限制性定语从句。本文还出现比较好的连词，如：if,because,besides 使文章前后连贯顺畅。