Question

【题目】书面表达

现今，中国学生的书写越来越差。你认为原因何在？应该如何来改善这种情况？请你就此谈谈你的看法。

要点：

1. 分析导致中学生书写差的原因（两点）；

2. 中学生应该如何提高自己的书写（至少两点）；

3. 呼吁大家重视书写，提高书写质量。

要求：

1.不得照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名；

2.语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

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Answer 1

【答案】Nowadays，Chinese students'handwriting is getting worse．The overuse of computers and mobile phones may be the main reason．Besides，students don't pay much attention to their handwriting and usually they write carelessly．

To improve our handwriting，I think we should practice more． Sparing some time every day to practice will surely make a difference to our handwriting．Next，while doing homework，we may slow down and try to write more carefully．What's more，mastering some skills of writing is also necessary．

Someone says we can tell what a person is like through his handwriting．It's quite true．So，let's pay more attention to our handwriting and improve it little by little．

【解析】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如get worse，may be，pay much attention to，every day，make a difference，while doing homework，try to do，What's more，be like，little by little等。同时Besides…Next…What's more…的使用使短文条理清晰，而Someone says we can tell what a person is like through his handwriting./ To improve our handwriting，I think we should practice more.等宾语从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。