Question

【题目】写作

请你根据以下提示，以 My hometown为题写一篇短文。（不少于80字）

1．我的家乡是一座历史悠久的小镇，离上海大约一个半小时车程。

2．多条河流穿镇而过，因鱼米而出名。

3．过去人们过着贫困的生活，但近几年发生了很大变化。大多数人已搬进了新公寓。

4．政府正采取措施改善我们的生活。环境比以前好了很多。

5．我相信…

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Answer 1

【答案】

My hometown is a small town with a long history. It takes about one and a half hours to take a bus here from shanghai. Several rivers go through the town. It is famous for fish and rice. People had a poor life in the past. But it has changed a lot in the past few years. Most people have moved into the new flats. The government is doing something to improve our life. The environment is better than before. I believe my hometown will be better.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇给材料的作文，让学生介绍自己家乡。本文给出了一些要点。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：该文语句通顺，段落清晰，表达了题目所给出的各个要点。短文用了一些短语和句式，增加了文章的色彩如：It is famous for fish and rice. I believe my hometown will be better..等等。